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Post by HardkoreMarine on Sept 30, 2005 17:05:03 GMT -4
thatz a good one.....
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Post by Red Eye Mandy on Oct 10, 2005 12:35:11 GMT -4
this board has a lot of talented writers here
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Post by bomber8013 on Oct 20, 2005 17:53:41 GMT -4
I don't know how much more I can take No matter what I do all of this just ends in heart break To pretend to love you is more than fake Its like taking a hit to the heart with the bad end of a rake Like taking a stab 2 the heart like a knife to a steak Chopped to bits and swallowed On the way to the acid pits Below the throat A hole in the bottom of boat A waste A pain It aint the same I cant go back the way I came It is a shame You are my dame You should love me You should hold me We are family Till death do us part I wont leave you unless im dead Being taken away in a cart To heaven I will go With god i will wait Until the date I can spend eternety with my mate Unless you really do hate Me. Is this break-up just fate I can't take the recent I can't take the late Upon this day I have to say Infront of god And the power that be It is now over between you and me
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Post by HardkoreMarine on Oct 20, 2005 17:55:13 GMT -4
thatz a good one.....thatz a fukkin awsum one
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Post by RoadResurrected on Oct 20, 2005 17:57:34 GMT -4
dude, thats f*ckin sick, pretty damn good one bomber, good job
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Post by bomber8013 on Oct 22, 2005 23:02:29 GMT -4
I love her But I can't say I can't tell her the way I feel Round and round it goes Its like a giant wheel Once you get to the top It just goes back down Goes down without a sound Without warning You know its coming But it just keep swarming Over you like a wave I would love to save These words until the right moment When I can show it And tell her my hearts desire It burns inside me like a fire When i'm with her I don't get tired I cant go to sleep No matter what I do I can't get a wink I can't close my eyes I despise not being able to see her at night All I try all I fight I try to be nice To be polite But I just can't find the right Time. I walk a mile and I only Move a stride. But i would walk a million Miles by the day Just so i can find the right words to say I would keep walking Not stop till May I would waste away Count my days See how long I have to live until I can see her face And finally be able to sleep Meet my misery in a junk heap I would give it all up Just for her But as i said i just cant find the words To express myself this is getting absurb Even the love of my life I do not deserve I am worthy of neither pity Nor eternal pain My love pours out like a water main It just won't stop until it can't reach the top Well I guess its about time for me to stop Ive made this poem so long when you done you'll drop
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