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Sept 23, 2005 15:48:04 GMT -4
Post by RoadResurrected on Sept 23, 2005 15:48:04 GMT -4
here you go guys, i'm not suicidal, so don't get worried and shit....
Before you sigh let me get in this first hi. Before you die let me get in this final goodbye. Walked on by and saw those red wrist cry. Thought I'd try, try to convince you not to die. Hope to God that I didn't fail, thinking that I somewhat prevailed. Then I see those red wrist still crying, hearing you say "you wish you were dying". I then kneel in front of you, taking that knife that you once used. Hope to God he spares your life, while you see one stroke of the knife. Yelling take me instead, now guess who is dead. This throat is now the one to cry, as you watch a dear friend demise. Before your eyes I had to die, because I knew I couldn't deal with your suicide...
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Sept 23, 2005 16:04:31 GMT -4
Post by HardkoreMarine on Sept 23, 2005 16:04:31 GMT -4
wuznt thiz the poem u red over the fone 2 that girl???.......
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Sept 23, 2005 16:07:09 GMT -4
Post by RoadResurrected on Sept 23, 2005 16:07:09 GMT -4
no that was a different one...very diff.
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Sept 23, 2005 17:55:48 GMT -4
Post by Mystic on Sept 23, 2005 17:55:48 GMT -4
nice poem its sad
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Sept 24, 2005 14:16:00 GMT -4
Post by Red Eye Mandy on Sept 24, 2005 14:16:00 GMT -4
yeah, very morbid, but would love to read more, Road.
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Sept 24, 2005 21:07:03 GMT -4
Post by RoadResurrected on Sept 24, 2005 21:07:03 GMT -4
heres a REALLY short one, written bout 1 1/2 years ago.
Past this week, past this month. Past everything cause I gave it up. I try my best but yet I failed. I took to that so I bailed. I ran and I left, I left and I ran. Away from these problems I could never stand. But they will always follow and haunt me to my death. Thats why its easier to just be put to rest...
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Sept 24, 2005 22:39:03 GMT -4
Post by Mystic on Sept 24, 2005 22:39:03 GMT -4
wow thats a nice one road keep them coming
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Sept 24, 2005 22:48:30 GMT -4
Post by Red Eye Mandy on Sept 24, 2005 22:48:30 GMT -4
wow thats a nice one road keep them coming I quite agree, its quite refreshing to have a true poet in this forum
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Sept 25, 2005 0:57:17 GMT -4
Post by RoadResurrected on Sept 25, 2005 0:57:17 GMT -4
ty ty...but i'm no poet...or i'm I?hmmmmm
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Sept 25, 2005 1:02:38 GMT -4
Post by RoadResurrected on Sept 25, 2005 1:02:38 GMT -4
i have tons of poems, mosty bout my ex,and love...yea, i really don't like em so they won't be gettin posted, but anyone else here who writes shit???
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Sept 25, 2005 9:40:30 GMT -4
Post by Mystic on Sept 25, 2005 9:40:30 GMT -4
oh y aint u goin to put them up?? well i dont write poems not good at that
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Sept 25, 2005 10:41:43 GMT -4
Post by RoadResurrected on Sept 25, 2005 10:41:43 GMT -4
ooo, i really dont like em
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Sept 25, 2005 10:46:30 GMT -4
Post by Mystic on Sept 25, 2005 10:46:30 GMT -4
#wink2# o ok
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Sept 25, 2005 11:28:01 GMT -4
Post by RoadResurrected on Sept 25, 2005 11:28:01 GMT -4
Its taken its last breath. Everything good about it has left. It was brutally slayed. And six feet under is where it lays. Try to resurrect it but its too late. Its gone to the point where all you have for it is hate. It was good, but thats in the past. We made it like it was going to last. We act like its so filled with life. Truth is, we should give the clan a final goodnight...
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Sept 25, 2005 12:08:44 GMT -4
Post by Mystic on Sept 25, 2005 12:08:44 GMT -4
oooooo that one i great road
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