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Oct 19, 2005 21:03:11 GMT -4
Post by RoadResurrected on Oct 19, 2005 21:03:11 GMT -4
wrote in work today
Lets go ahead and forget the memories is what you said. If its like that, then why don't I just drop dead. To think of such a thing would put me in this final bed. My last resting place is where I would be lead. I say lets not do such a thing. We have a lot of feelings to bring. Because I'd like to live a life filled with you, hoping you feel the same way too. You are my heart, you are my soul. My one and only, till I go cold.
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Oct 20, 2005 14:08:20 GMT -4
Post by Mystic on Oct 20, 2005 14:08:20 GMT -4
Great poem!
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Oct 22, 2005 23:11:15 GMT -4
Post by RoadResurrected on Oct 22, 2005 23:11:15 GMT -4
I swear to you, I didn't mean those nasty words I said. Lets just say goodnight and see what tomorrow haves in-stored for us instead. Every time we fight I know I'm in above my head. A broken relationship is where we're going to be lead. But I'd love to try, try not to fight and lie. So give us another chance in this relationship. Because my heart is the one who doesn't want to get ripped.
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Oct 23, 2005 17:22:53 GMT -4
Post by Mystic on Oct 23, 2005 17:22:53 GMT -4
Another good one
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Oct 23, 2005 20:47:19 GMT -4
Post by RoadResurrected on Oct 23, 2005 20:47:19 GMT -4
thx
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Oct 23, 2005 22:40:40 GMT -4
Post by Red Eye Mandy on Oct 23, 2005 22:40:40 GMT -4
i always like your writing cause it seems to be a reflection of your inner thoughts, whether intentional or not. Either way, your work is real to life, and that is a plus for me
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Oct 23, 2005 23:09:57 GMT -4
Post by RoadResurrected on Oct 23, 2005 23:09:57 GMT -4
whos this??? and thx lots
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Oct 24, 2005 9:08:28 GMT -4
Post by Red Eye Mandy on Oct 24, 2005 9:08:28 GMT -4
you're welcome btw: its redeye if you really didnt know
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Oct 24, 2005 20:17:07 GMT -4
Post by Mystic on Oct 24, 2005 20:17:07 GMT -4
lol yeah she changed her name duh! lol jk
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Oct 28, 2005 17:10:22 GMT -4
Post by RoadResurrected on Oct 28, 2005 17:10:22 GMT -4
Why don't we all just rest our sleepy eyes. Soon enough we'll all just die. But please don't sigh. We all know its coming, so don't even cry. We all would like to live an internal life filled with pride. But you can't run from death, nor can you hide. So how about you just rest your sleepy head. And before you know it, you'll be dead.
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Oct 30, 2005 21:12:16 GMT -4
Post by Red Eye Mandy on Oct 30, 2005 21:12:16 GMT -4
thats pretty morbid, and makes life seem rather pointless *just thought I'd add that I do like it though
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Nov 3, 2005 16:33:04 GMT -4
Post by RoadResurrected on Nov 3, 2005 16:33:04 GMT -4
well...u kinda have to read it and think about it...then you probally what this poem is really about
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Nov 3, 2005 19:44:21 GMT -4
Post by Red Eye Mandy on Nov 3, 2005 19:44:21 GMT -4
ah well, poetry seems to go over my head 99.9% of the time anyways, thats why i dont really like it lol, but it is without a doubt an art form, and so thats what i take into consideration when deciding what i like or dont like
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Nov 3, 2005 22:13:01 GMT -4
Post by RoadResurrected on Nov 3, 2005 22:13:01 GMT -4
um...u gotta point, but still i dont think its morbid
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Nov 18, 2005 16:53:45 GMT -4
Post by RoadResurrected on Nov 18, 2005 16:53:45 GMT -4
this one is not that great but i have to put one up
Hey Hello Goodbye? Hell no We've just met, give me a chance and I'll do it I bet. A mute is what i just might be, I hate this shyness inside of me. Feeling like taking something and ripping it out. Wait and give me the shadow of a doubt. I might be able to say something. Here it comes...no, its nothing. Seems so hard just to say whats up. So many chances but yet I fuck them all up.
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